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Anthro Wiaw by witchiamwill Anthro Wiaw by witchiamwill
I sketched this up while broadcasting on Ustream. Thanks to everyone that came, I was inspired.
Lioness anthro Shek'al (C) WIAW

I want critiques! Good and bad welcome.
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Nice character design you have here. I really like her outfit, the hood connecting to her shirt is well done, and she has a really nice expression on her face. It makes me wonder what she's thinking about, looking so sad. :] The gesture is also really nice, I think you're off to a good start with it.

The main thing I'm seeing is anatomy related. The way she's sitting seems a little bit unnatural to me. The way her legs are situated right now, it's not clear if she's sitting or if she's kneeling. If she's sitting, you may want to consider moving her tail up a bit - sitting on a tail that way would be pretty uncomfortable, I'm sure. : )

If she's kneeling, I'd suggest "flattening" out the bottom of the leg closest to us a bit so that it's resting along the ground rather than going upward at an angle. You may also want to consider showing some of the foot coming out from behind her knee, either way - it looks like it's vanishing into her leg at the moment.

Her hands also feel a little wobbly. If you can, the easiest thing to do is to just grab a broom and hold it in that position, and see how your hands fall. Right now, the hands don't really feel like they're "gripping" the stick, especially the one on the bottom. It's a little too circular. On the top hand, in order for her knuckles to be turned toward her face like that, she would need to be holding her wrist in a very uncomfortable angle. We should probably see more of her thumb and first knuckles.

You're off to a really good start, I'd love to see you push it just a little further. : ) Nice work!
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The detail on this piece is awesome. I love the folds of the clothing, the little designs all over the straps even the way the hood connects so well to the shirt without completely taking out the lines of the side of the neck and the jaw bone. The position is nice but I agree with the previous critique before mine that the bottom hand could use a little improvement as far as position went.
Poor little girl looks upset over something... Makes the viewer want to jump in and huggle her. :hug: But then again curiosity was never a good thing when it came to cats... I think.

My ratings:

Vision 5/5- It's a very nice pieces to pick apart and see every little detail. In skill, she has a ton to show off and she surely did with this anthro!

Originality 5/5- Speaks for itself! :D

Technique 4.5/5- Minor detail like the hand took off a few points. Other than that it's awesome. <3

Impact 5/5- There are a lot of things we can learn from...this is one of them. She combines human and lion traits well and if one wants to make an attempt, taking a good look at this picture is a good idea.
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Bionic-Kitty Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG THATS SOOOO AWESOME!!!!! i love it!
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witchiamwill Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
shyea
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Bionic-Kitty Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
PUre awesomsomness!
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witchiamwill Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
=D
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LycanStar Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009
Awesome! She actually looks like an anthro version of the woman from the Power Rangers movie.. you know... the one that kicked the lot of ass?

Yes, that.. but this one seems more mystic.
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witchiamwill Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks rofl but the ass kicking anthro here is anthro me. rofl
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LycanStar Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009
lol
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:iconwis13:
wis13 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009
Great character design:D
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witchiamwill Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Shbam! Anthro attack!
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wis13 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009
:D
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mystikk159 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
whoa, wolf lady!
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witchiamwill Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no lion but ok Rofl
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mystikk159 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
hehe. :D
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DarkRed27 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i liek dis! :>
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witchiamwill Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
me to
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DarkRed27 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good :> It's always good when you like your own art, isn't it? :)
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witchiamwill Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yup yup
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lordofguitar Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009
wow just wow i'd have to agree with the critique thought th back leg does look odd >< srry I wasn't there 4 the end had 2 go but other than that it looks awsome
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witchiamwill Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yea =D It was fun though. I'll probably revamp it sometime.
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lordofguitar Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009
cool look forward 2 it =D
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Indoah Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009
Nice work. =D
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witchiamwill Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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ToshirotheKnightWolf Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
EPIC AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
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witchiamwill Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
=D
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ToshirotheKnightWolf Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
:XD:
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